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Old 07-14-2013, 11:58 PM
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New company, new ad

Just thought I'd throw up a new ad I'm running. Just started my company kind of late in the season so I won't push real hard until fall clean ups start. This is posted on our facebook page, on craigslist and print versions on several bulletin boards around town.

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Looks good! Really like the logo
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Old 07-15-2013, 12:00 AM
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Thanks, marrying a graphic designer is paying dividends already
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Old 07-15-2013, 09:58 AM
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Nice, clean and simple!
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Old 07-15-2013, 11:16 AM
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As it doesn't seem you're looking for feedback, I'll just point out that you have a typo in the "for whatever our customers needs may be" line.
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Old 07-15-2013, 11:25 AM
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As it doesn't seem you're looking for feedback, I'll just point out that you have a typo in the "for whatever our customers needs may be" line.
I'm taking feedback what's the typo? Should there be an apostrophe in customers and is it before or after the s? I never understood that possessive stuff in school
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Old 07-15-2013, 06:19 PM
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For the next batch I would use "all of" instead of "whatever"
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Old 07-15-2013, 08:36 PM
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Old 07-15-2013, 08:38 PM
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Its not too late for a next batch now. Keep the advice coming and I will podt the updates when its done. The only money I have into this is the cost of printing so its really negligible to change it
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Old 07-15-2013, 08:46 PM
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Thanks tony. I hope I do better with lawn care than I do English or this could be rough
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