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Old 09-03-2012, 12:40 PM
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Critique my aeration flyer please

Hi

Please provide me with some feedback for my aeration flyer.

Im trying to do a couple off aerations this fall, with my tow behind aerator which works pretty good. That is also the reason why im not charging 300 dollars because my machine wont give me that kind of result so im trying to be fair with my customers here.
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Old 09-03-2012, 12:42 PM
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Old 09-03-2012, 12:45 PM
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E see no flyer
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Old 09-03-2012, 12:48 PM
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Sorry made it an .pdf now it should work
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File Type: pdf Aeration flyer.pdf (257.2 KB, 363 views)
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Old 09-03-2012, 12:52 PM
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what is the benefit?
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Old 09-03-2012, 12:59 PM
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what is the benefit?
soil enhancement?
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Old 09-03-2012, 01:05 PM
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soil enhancement?
How does that help the client?

I am doing this exercises for myself too.

What are people buying and why do they want it?
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Old 09-03-2012, 01:50 PM
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I think it needs more color and a grsphic to show people what they are getting. Ditto on what deukster said as well
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Old 09-03-2012, 07:52 PM
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If you'd like some inspiration to punch it up a bit...

Lawn Service Flyers - Google Images

Aeration Flyers - Google Images
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Old 12-24-2012, 01:45 PM
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Nice links.


Also add phases like:
"thicker lawn", "greener lawn", "less weeds"

You are selling to a homeowner, not a landscaper.
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