Don't mean to be harsh but it's a slideshow of pictures with nintendo music playing. If I were a consumer I wouldn't be buying based on that video. As a consumer provided you have a website and I can find it which I'm assuming I could because how else would I find the video, I could go to your project gallery and see all those pictures at a pace that I'm comfortable with and not have annoying music.
Objectively: Put yourself in the video and talk to me about what you can do for me. Also your name is in the beginning but the only time your contact information appears is at the end. Your video is 1:48 which doesn't seem long but read this article http://wistia.com/blog/does-length-m...does-for-video
less roughly 50% of your viewers will watch your video all the way to the end. I would recommend you either shorten it up a bit or at least add your contact info earlier in the video so that people will see it, actually wouldn't be too hard to add it in throughout the video so at any point that people see something that says I want them to work for me it's right there in front of them.