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Old 01-16-2003, 02:38 AM
cutterj cutterj is offline
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another flyer critique

please critique my flyer. This is a first draft, and the first design i came up with this year. You can be as mean as you want i can handle it. Please give me any ideas on how to word things better, design it better. etc
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Old 01-16-2003, 03:36 AM
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cutter..


Too plain for my taste... try different fonts,,, pics clip art...border different....


but that is just my .02....


Do you have a program like publisher in stead of word... just wondering as it is a better program for stuff like that ... but work is still good... especially when on a tight budget...





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Old 01-16-2003, 09:29 AM
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dude, i'm still waiting for you to call.. i have all those leads laying here, waiting for you....
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Old 01-16-2003, 10:46 AM
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You get for what you pay for. Spend some money and get a quality flyer. People respond to flyers that look professional. You will gain more clients if your flyers, letters and proposals look professional. Conduct a search for "Flyers" and you will find several posts about flyers. Many of them look good and others ned help.

Good Luck!!!!!
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Old 01-16-2003, 12:48 PM
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at LEAST add colour...
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Old 01-16-2003, 12:56 PM
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Color and graphics at the very least. Or better yet, have a professional create your material.
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Old 01-16-2003, 03:09 PM
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call focal point..
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Old 01-16-2003, 07:02 PM
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garbage. sorry to be blunt

let me try to get a post of my flyer up here. mine is pretty kickass but i need some help trimming some words down and making it straight to the point
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Old 01-16-2003, 07:39 PM
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hey js, put your kick *** flyer up and i'll show you mine.
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Old 01-16-2003, 11:15 PM
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like i said, first attempt this year
the only thing i really liked about it was the start of the logo, i really only rushed to get it done because i need to give what info i need to put on my direct mail 115000 about.
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