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Old 02-13-2014, 10:44 PM
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What do you think?

I bought a third of a page in a local coupon magazine. There is only one other lawn care company in the book. The area I chose goes to 29000 residents. Input would be greatly appreciated.
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Old 02-13-2014, 11:39 PM
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I did notice the comma missing and already emailed the designer. Would y'all reword anything?
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Old 02-13-2014, 11:40 PM
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Looks good, hopefully you will have a lot of people bite. I personally have never had a coupon or discount for my business.
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Old 02-14-2014, 12:18 AM
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I changed weed eating to trimming and added free estimates.
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Old 02-14-2014, 01:47 AM
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What do you think?

Looks awesome
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Old 02-14-2014, 10:33 AM
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Old 02-14-2014, 10:45 AM
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Looks good! How much did you pay for it? Can you update us on the ROI?
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looks good. hope you will keep us posted later on with your results from this.. good luck!
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Old 02-14-2014, 11:17 AM
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You didn't list your website.

I'd drop the "Annual Lawn Maintenance Contracts" from your "Services We Offer"…Your 10% off coupon already communicated that you offer an annual package deal at a discount…Use your list of services to grab the reader's attention with things that will benefit them that they want/need.

I'd change "Mulching" to either "Mulch Installation" or "Mulch & Plant Installations"

Consider increasing the size of the font for the "Services We Offer"

Services We Offer

Lawn Mowing & Yard Care (or simply "Lawn & Yard Care")
Landscape Design & Maintenance
Mulch & Plant Installations
Spring & Fall Clean-Up
And Much More...
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Old 02-14-2014, 01:19 PM
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You didn't list your website.

I'd drop the "Annual Lawn Maintenance Contracts" from your "Services We Offer"…Your 10% off coupon already communicated that you offer an annual package deal at a discount…Use your list of services to grab the reader's attention with things that will benefit them that they want/need.

I'd change "Mulching" to either "Mulch Installation" or "Mulch & Plant Installations"

Consider increasing the size of the font for the "Services We Offer"

Services We Offer

Lawn Mowing & Yard Care (or simply "Lawn & Yard Care")
Landscape Design & Maintenance
Mulch & Plant Installations
Spring & Fall Clean-Up
And Much More...

Thanks for the advice.
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