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Old 05-06-2003, 07:34 PM
Green in Idaho Green in Idaho is offline
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Owner's Compensation

Hey folks,
I wrote an article awhile back that was directed to lawn care business owners. I'm now thinking of submitting to some of the national trade rags. But I would like some constructive criticism of it, before I submit it.

Since the target audience is for people just like you, could you do me a favor and take a few minutes to read it and directly send me comments for improving it. Or posting general opinions about here for conversation.

My concerns are:
1) Is it NEW information. As in, is "the concept of four elements of compensation and combineing them" new.
2) Is it clear to understand for someone who has never thought about the issues of the article.
3) Would it make someone operate their business differently.
4) Is it helpful to a business owner.

There are a few typos, which I'm not too worried about right now, but if there are major problems with 'the flow' of the reading please advise.

I appreciate it.

Here's the link to the article in pdf format.

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Old 05-06-2003, 10:21 PM
John Allin John Allin is offline
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Well done.
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Old 05-06-2003, 11:30 PM
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Reads Loud n Clear to Me ;->

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Old 05-06-2003, 11:55 PM
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Nice analysis!
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