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Discussion in 'Business Operations' started by lawnproslawncare, Mar 4, 2008.
Here's my newest ad for our local paper.
I need your feedback please.
Here is my Spring clean up ad. Basically the same
"if were more than 3 days late......... instead of "that"
I would just state that you are insured not the amount you are insured for....
nice looking ad
Our area seems concerned with that number for coverage...but i see where you might be coming from
Seems so 3 grader....not trying to anger you constructive Criticism..!!!
What if it rains for two or three days straight? Are you going to give all of those clients you were late for a free mowing?
maybe instead of the clean attire,etc...
Professional Lawn Maintenance & Landscaping Services at an affordable price!
or... Professional,Courteous,Prompt Lawn Service at an affordable price!
-is that what the ad is going to actually look like, because its kinda blurry and hard to read.
Here's My changes
By the way, I appreciate the Criticism.
What do you mean by 3rd grader?
I guess I should explain that the newspaper company will be making there own ad, this is just a rough estimate.
Please tell me what you would change