'08 Newspaper ad

Discussion in 'Business Operations' started by lawnproslawncare, Mar 4, 2008.

  1. lawnproslawncare

    lawnproslawncare LawnSite Senior Member
    Posts: 437

    Here's my newest ad for our local paper.
    I need your feedback please.
     

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  2. lawnproslawncare

    lawnproslawncare LawnSite Senior Member
    Posts: 437

    Here is my Spring clean up ad. Basically the same
     

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  3. Raven386

    Raven386 LawnSite Silver Member
    from CT
    Posts: 2,160

    "if were more than 3 days late......... instead of "that"
     
  4. Raven386

    Raven386 LawnSite Silver Member
    from CT
    Posts: 2,160

    I would just state that you are insured not the amount you are insured for....
     
  5. RGM

    RGM LawnSite Senior Member
    Male, from Baltimore Md
    Posts: 979

    nice looking ad
     
  6. lawnproslawncare

    lawnproslawncare LawnSite Senior Member
    Posts: 437

    Our area seems concerned with that number for coverage...but i see where you might be coming from
    Thanks
     
  7. Turf Commando

    Turf Commando LawnSite Bronze Member
    Posts: 1,186

    Seems so 3 grader....not trying to anger you constructive Criticism..!!!
     
  8. CALandscapes

    CALandscapes LawnSite Senior Member
    Posts: 946

    What if it rains for two or three days straight? Are you going to give all of those clients you were late for a free mowing?
     
  9. Raven386

    Raven386 LawnSite Silver Member
    from CT
    Posts: 2,160

    Referals=referrals

    maybe instead of the clean attire,etc...
    Professional Lawn Maintenance & Landscaping Services at an affordable price!

    or... Professional,Courteous,Prompt Lawn Service at an affordable price!

    -is that what the ad is going to actually look like, because its kinda blurry and hard to read.
     
  10. lawnproslawncare

    lawnproslawncare LawnSite Senior Member
    Posts: 437

    Here's My changes
    By the way, I appreciate the Criticism.
    What do you mean by 3rd grader?
    I guess I should explain that the newspaper company will be making there own ad, this is just a rough estimate.

    Please tell me what you would change
     

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