another flyer critique

Discussion in 'Business Operations' started by cutterj, Jan 16, 2003.

  1. cutterj

    cutterj LawnSite Member
    Posts: 42

    please critique my flyer. This is a first draft, and the first design i came up with this year. You can be as mean as you want i can handle it. Please give me any ideas on how to word things better, design it better. etc
     

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  2. gslam88

    gslam88 LawnSite Member
    Posts: 146

    cutter..


    Too plain for my taste... try different fonts,,, pics clip art...border different....


    but that is just my .02....


    Do you have a program like publisher in stead of word... just wondering as it is a better program for stuff like that ... but work is still good... especially when on a tight budget...





    Pete
     
  3. f350

    f350 Banned
    from mi
    Posts: 424

    dude, i'm still waiting for you to call.. i have all those leads laying here, waiting for you....
     
  4. Barry D

    Barry D LawnSite Member
    from Georgia
    Posts: 44

    You get for what you pay for. Spend some money and get a quality flyer. People respond to flyers that look professional. You will gain more clients if your flyers, letters and proposals look professional. Conduct a search for "Flyers" and you will find several posts about flyers. Many of them look good and others ned help.

    Good Luck!!!!!
     
  5. bubble boy

    bubble boy LawnSite Bronze Member
    Posts: 1,020

    at LEAST add colour...
     
  6. turfmarketing

    turfmarketing LawnSite Member
    from Ohio
    Posts: 49

    Color and graphics at the very least. Or better yet, have a professional create your material.
     
  7. f350

    f350 Banned
    from mi
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  8. jslawncare

    jslawncare LawnSite Member
    Posts: 89

    garbage. sorry to be blunt

    let me try to get a post of my flyer up here. mine is pretty kickass but i need some help trimming some words down and making it straight to the point
     
  9. f350

    f350 Banned
    from mi
    Posts: 424

    hey js, put your kick *** flyer up and i'll show you mine.
     
  10. cutterj

    cutterj LawnSite Member
    Posts: 42

    like i said, first attempt this year
    the only thing i really liked about it was the start of the logo, i really only rushed to get it done because i need to give what info i need to put on my direct mail 115000 about.
     

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