Another flyer to critique...

Discussion in 'Business Operations' started by Signature Services, May 7, 2004.

  1. Signature Services

    Signature Services LawnSite Member
    Posts: 43

    Here's a flyer in WORD. Don't know if you all can check this out but the information I am looking for is:

    Basic attention grabbing?
    Layout?
    Content?
    And any suggestions for what color paper to put it on or where to dispurse.
    I am thinking of pizza boxes. Anyone else ever do that? How did you do it?

    Thanks in advance,
    Billy
     

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  2. Trevors Lawn Care

    Trevors Lawn Care LawnSite Bronze Member
    Posts: 1,180

    That is boring. I made better flyers than that as projects in 3rd grade. get rid of the bullets, and that paragraph thing at the top. If i wasnt trying to help you out i would have stopped reading it at the 90. It needs to look more professional.

    Trevor
     
  3. WeatherMan

    WeatherMan LawnSite Senior Member
    Posts: 693

    I agree very boring, and the $50.00 value will make a lot of peeps think you are way to high. So they wont even call.
     
  4. Team Gopher

    Team Gopher LawnSite Platinum Member
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    Posts: 4,041

    Hi Signature Services,

    Here are some more ideas for incentives to get customers to sign up with you.
     

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