Separate names with a comma.
Discussion in 'Digital Marketing' started by mexiking, Feb 19, 2006.
what do you guys think of my companys new website?
Not bad but some of the grammar is poor.
yeah i recently finished it, gota revise everything..
nice layout, good pictures.... but i will have to agree that you need someone to proof read your grammer.
still has several run on sentances, and the comma placements are not correct in some of phrases
aside from the grammer issue, the site looks great
Looks good, but like some one said before a lot of run on sentences. I would look into a proof reader or some one like that, that can get your point across in shorter "to the point sentences". Like in the fall clean up section, why not just say something like, We are very detailed when it comes to your property, from the tightest corner to all open areas, all leaves and all other debris are removed. Or something like that. It gets the point across but it doesn't go into every little setail of every serivce.
I hate to be a major critic but, You really need to change the format of your pictures, takes too long to load the pages, especially the home page.
I have cable and had to wait for it to load, I would really hate to open that on a dial up connection.
id on't believe its the size of the pics but rather his webhost is slooooowww
Nice website, good layout. The pictures are a little slow to load but otherwise pretty good!! Nice truck and trailer too! You may want to show some more pictures of your work. Looks good
holly crap that looks familuar
had mine for over 3 years. Where u get your template from?
oh another thing. you dont have a contact page. how are people supposed to get ahold of u if they find u on the net??