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check out my companys new website

Discussion in 'Digital Marketing' started by mexiking, Feb 19, 2006.

  1. mexiking

    mexiking LawnSite Senior Member
    from NJ
    Posts: 564

  2. echovalley

    echovalley LawnSite Member
    from CT
    Posts: 91

    Not bad but some of the grammar is poor.
  3. mexiking

    mexiking LawnSite Senior Member
    from NJ
    Posts: 564

    yeah i recently finished it, gota revise everything..
  4. YardPro

    YardPro LawnSite Gold Member
    Posts: 3,563

    nice layout, good pictures.... but i will have to agree that you need someone to proof read your grammer.

    still has several run on sentances, and the comma placements are not correct in some of phrases

    aside from the grammer issue, the site looks great
  5. nobagger

    nobagger LawnSite Gold Member
    from Pa
    Posts: 3,065

    Looks good, but like some one said before a lot of run on sentences. I would look into a proof reader or some one like that, that can get your point across in shorter "to the point sentences". Like in the fall clean up section, why not just say something like, We are very detailed when it comes to your property, from the tightest corner to all open areas, all leaves and all other debris are removed. Or something like that. It gets the point across but it doesn't go into every little setail of every serivce.
  6. stumper1620

    stumper1620 LawnSite Bronze Member
    Posts: 1,889

    I hate to be a major critic but, You really need to change the format of your pictures, takes too long to load the pages, especially the home page.
    I have cable and had to wait for it to load, I would really hate to open that on a dial up connection.
  7. BSDeality

    BSDeality LawnSite Silver Member
    Posts: 2,850

    id on't believe its the size of the pics but rather his webhost is slooooowww
  8. srl28

    srl28 LawnSite Bronze Member
    Posts: 1,176

    Nice website, good layout. The pictures are a little slow to load but otherwise pretty good!! Nice truck and trailer too! You may want to show some more pictures of your work. Looks good
  9. maelawncare

    maelawncare LawnSite Senior Member
    Posts: 418

    holly crap that looks familuar :D


    had mine for over 3 years. :D Where u get your template from?
  10. maelawncare

    maelawncare LawnSite Senior Member
    Posts: 418

    oh another thing. you dont have a contact page. how are people supposed to get ahold of u if they find u on the net??

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