Do you like the new BizCard design?

Discussion in 'Business Operations' started by TLC Lawn Care, Jan 19, 2006.

  1. TLC Lawn Care

    TLC Lawn Care LawnSite Member
    Posts: 13

    Okay LCO's - I am seeking your constructive criticism on my new BizCard design:blob4: Thanks for your input..

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  2. Carolina Cuts

    Carolina Cuts LawnSite Bronze Member
    Posts: 1,152

    Personally, I like the color scheme and the design.. but I'm having a problem with the little 'n' in LAWnScapes... the first thing I read was LAW and it pretty much stopped right there... then I saw... LAW & Scapes... know what I mean?
     
  3. rodfather

    rodfather LawnSite Fanatic
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    get rid of Owner: and change from Fertilization to Fertilizing
     
  4. cgland

    cgland LawnSite Bronze Member
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    I like the layout & logo, but I too don't understand the little "n"

    Chris
     
  5. mikefromny

    mikefromny LawnSite Member
    Posts: 224

    i think he was going after a meaning of like Lawn (n) Scapes but i gotta admit it doesnt look all that right try lawn N scapes might look better than LAWnScapes just my 0.02 abraham lincolns
     
  6. nobagger

    nobagger LawnSite Gold Member
    from Pa
    Posts: 3,065

    I think it looks really good except what the other's have said- I would just capitalize the L and the S and leave the rest lower case. And I would put landscaping in your list of services.
     
  7. nobagger

    nobagger LawnSite Gold Member
    from Pa
    Posts: 3,065

    Just one more thought, I wouldn't list trimming and edging, that kinda goe's hand in hand with mowing. But that leaves you more room for things like pruning, spring and fall clean ups.
     
  8. TLC Lawn Care

    TLC Lawn Care LawnSite Member
    Posts: 13

    Thanks for everyone's opinion. I wanted to bring uniqueness to my logo spelling LAWnScapes the way it is laid out. I am a police officer in my 'other' job, hence, the LAW being separated from the title. I was looking for an eye catcher and everyone knows me as an officer before a LCO. I had the card re-designed using a different font.. I thought the first font was too fuzzy..

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  9. out4now

    out4now LawnSite Bronze Member
    from AZ
    Posts: 1,796

    I like it. I ge the connection between the law enforcement thing now but it still looks a little odd to me with the small n and the other leeter caps.
     
  10. drsogr

    drsogr LawnSite Bronze Member
    Posts: 1,275

    Doesn't look too bad...what are you designing it with? It could be made to look alot smoother.
     

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