Feedback on postcard design

Discussion in 'Business Operations' started by LonniesLawns, Jun 7, 2007.

  1. LonniesLawns

    LonniesLawns LawnSite Senior Member
    from KS
    Posts: 317

    Feedback on advertisement

    Here is a postcard my designer and I are working on.

    Feedback would be appreciated.

    family postcard proof (Medium).jpg
     
  2. BQLC

    BQLC LawnSite Senior Member
    Posts: 574

    In my opinion it looks great it also hits home with the family oriented sales pitch
     
  3. mebergstran

    mebergstran LawnSite Member
    Posts: 36

    i like it.
     
  4. Tony Clifton

    Tony Clifton LawnSite Senior Member
    Posts: 865

    Looks great! Do you have any type of offer on the back? If not you need one or two.
    Also, the tag line on the bottom left is a bit boring and generic. I would really push your designer or yourself to come up with something better.
     
  5. LonniesLawns

    LonniesLawns LawnSite Senior Member
    from KS
    Posts: 317

    I have not yet designed the back yet -- but I will update you once it has been designed.
     
  6. fknippenberg

    fknippenberg LawnSite Member
    Posts: 49

    Yes defiently make sure you include some type of offer with the postcard. If there isn't an offer on the card you might as well just flush the money down the toilet.
     
  7. GreenN'Clean

    GreenN'Clean LawnSite Bronze Member
    Posts: 1,512

    It looks very professional
     
  8. Grits

    Grits LawnSite Silver Member
    from Florida
    Posts: 2,994

    dig it. one of the better that I have seen.
     
  9. LandscapeStrategy

    LandscapeStrategy LawnSite Member
    Posts: 1

    Looks great - I agree it is attractive and the family element adds to it.
     
  10. Cubguy

    Cubguy LawnSite Member
    Posts: 23

    very nice, good job
     

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