Final Draft!

Discussion in 'Business Operations' started by mcwlandscaping, Mar 28, 2006.

  1. mcwlandscaping

    mcwlandscaping LawnSite Gold Member
    Posts: 3,164

    OK here it is, made some changes, moved some things slightly, i couldn't get a dotted line border around the coupons so i just made it look like the bottom was a tear off.
     

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  2. MStine315

    MStine315 LawnSite Senior Member
    Posts: 789

    That's better, but I would change the 10% of aeration to "Save 10% off core aeration service" or something to that effect. Save 10% off "this service" doesn't read right for some reason. Marc
     
  3. grandview (2006)

    grandview (2006) LawnSite Gold Member
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    Instead of first mowing free how about a equal credit off a later bill?
     
  4. mcwlandscaping

    mcwlandscaping LawnSite Gold Member
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    GOOD catch, thanks, for pointing that out, ill be going to staples in about half an hour to make about 400 copies to be distibuted tomarrow! so, 30 more mins for suggestions!! speak now or forever hold your peace!!lol
     
  5. EliteImpressions

    EliteImpressions LawnSite Member
    from Jersey
    Posts: 215

    This may be too late, but as I have posted before... Do not use your company name as a title of your flyer. Maybe flip the coupons with the name of your company.
     
  6. mcwlandscaping

    mcwlandscaping LawnSite Gold Member
    Posts: 3,164

    Like this instead, i already made the first 350 with the first design, maybe ill use these for the next batch which ill probably need very soon!
     

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  7. EliteImpressions

    EliteImpressions LawnSite Member
    from Jersey
    Posts: 215

    That looks better but use the dotted lines around the coupons instead, it will stand out much more.
     
  8. mcwlandscaping

    mcwlandscaping LawnSite Gold Member
    Posts: 3,164

    I can only make it so there is one line under or over the coupons, with word i can't get it to go down the middle of the two.....oh well, that wil works....im out the door to go deliever the first 350 of these!! woohoo! hope this pays off for me!
     

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