Separate names with a comma.
Discussion in 'Digital Marketing' started by jtisc01, Mar 13, 2009.
Let me know what you think.
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Got on now. You need to capitalize your name on the home page in the smaller print. As for the $80 special is there a limit to the size of the yard? What happens if someone has a 5 acre lot will you do it for that price.
Honestly, I dont get into web sites that much. We have one but its as basic as web sites can be BUT we have got several calls from it. As far as yours......I think you need more pics of your work. I like the opening statement....I know where you got it from too ,lol. I use it in my letters as well. I didnt look at the whole thing but its ok.
thanks for the feedback guys
Grandview- the 80.00 special is just for 1200 sq ft. and below lawns. we used that coupon on some of our mailings last year and that was the most popular.
I was looking it over and just noticed that the following "We have the experience and knowledgeable staff that is able to service your needs from top to bottom. We do whatever it takes to make certain our clients are satisfied at all times."
should read(verb tension) "we have experienced and knowledgeable staff who are able to serve all your needs, from top to bottom. We do whatever it takes to ensure that our clients are satisfied at all times"
How about special #3 "free dethatch"
doesn't say you have to purchase anything or how big a property. Do you really just give out de-thatching jobs free no strings? Might want an Astrix