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Discussion in 'Digital Marketing' started by BZlawncare, Feb 17, 2013.

  1. tonygreek

    tonygreek LawnSite Gold Member
    Posts: 3,412

    What the other guys are saying is that this doesn't actually make much sense:
    BZ Lawn Care is owned and operated by an off duty firefighter, and most of our lawn specialist are also off duty firefighters!​

    This would be a correct way of saying it:
    BZ Lawn Care is owned and operated by a firefighter, and most of our lawn specialists are off-duty firefighters!​
     
  2. BZlawncare

    BZlawncare LawnSite Member
    Posts: 31

    Great thanks, keep them coming my Texas grammar is not the greatest! Thanks for the replies
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  3. tonygreek

    tonygreek LawnSite Gold Member
    Posts: 3,412

    No problem. Couple small issues remain...
    - should be "specialists", whereas you still have the singular "specialist".
    - "off duty" should be hyphenated, as off is a modifier.
     

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