Flyer Critique

Discussion in 'Starting a Lawn Care Business' started by unlimted01, Dec 25, 2007.

  1. unlimted01

    unlimted01 LawnSite Member
    Posts: 20

    Hey guys,
    I just finished up workin on a homemade flyer and i wanted to see what yall thought

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  2. IMAGE

    IMAGE LawnSite Bronze Member
    from midwest
    Posts: 1,134

    I have literally been staring at this picture for 3 minutes in awe. That is the nicest flyer I have ever seen. I hope your sending that as a high quality postcard or maybe even using a marketing service with nice posters in good locations. Once again, very very nice, good work!

    If you do it as a postcard, I would keep that picture on the front, with your logo, and put your services on the back.
     
  3. Military Lawns

    Military Lawns LawnSite Senior Member
    from Florida
    Posts: 321

    This is a very nice flyer. However, since you are asking for honest feedback, here is what I recommend.

    Spread your logo and slogan the entire length of the flyer. After awhile people will associate the logo and slogan with the name after a while. Brand recognition is important in this business. You want to make sure that you throw that in potential customers faces. You might not get a second chance.

    DJ
     
  4. ed2hess

    ed2hess LawnSite Fanatic
    Posts: 12,963

    Nice job....I think the name of business and telephone numbers should be larger and did you put email address? No sure what that comet flying thru the top of the picture means....am I missing something?
     
  5. Grits

    Grits LawnSite Silver Member
    from Florida
    Posts: 2,994

    Looks good. But it seems like something is missing from the top of the flyer....too much space. Maybe move the slogan (Bring your yard....) to the top and put your logo and tag line where the slogan is currently at.
    That is a pic off of gopher isn't it? Did you just put it in a word doc? It looks good for a homemade flyer.
     
  6. mattfromNY

    mattfromNY LawnSite Bronze Member
    Posts: 1,581

    Is that a mullet?
     
  7. unlimted01

    unlimted01 LawnSite Member
    Posts: 20

    Thanks guys and yea that is a pic that came off of gopher. I done the flyer completely in publisher. Ill repost after I make some changes as suggested.
     
  8. unlimted01

    unlimted01 LawnSite Member
    Posts: 20

    What do yall think now keep the ideas comin
    *The words aren't really in the picture they are above it*

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  9. MJS

    MJS LawnSite Bronze Member
    Posts: 1,316

    I would agree that the contact info should be more noticable, and the house looks kinda "cut and pasted" but overall I think it's a killer design. It's nice to see guys who put a little creativity into their advertising.
     
  10. PerfectEarth

    PerfectEarth LawnSite Bronze Member
    Posts: 1,735

    Hahaha, how about a house with some LANDSCAPING???
     

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