Flyer Feedback

Discussion in 'Business Operations' started by Grass Happens, Jan 21, 2008.

  1. Grass Happens

    Grass Happens LawnSite Senior Member
    Posts: 682

    Here is my prototype spring flyer. Any feed back would be greatly appreciated, but please don't make me cry! :cry: Just kidding.
    Thank you!
    Edit-I realized I misspelled installation...
     

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  2. InsuranceAgentCA

    InsuranceAgentCA LawnSite Member
    Posts: 3

    I am not a specialist but it looks a little busy. Too much text
     
  3. John Zaprala

    John Zaprala LawnSite Senior Member
    Posts: 283

    I'd change the font size for sure and I re-worded some thing sbelow to sound a little better. I also thought it could use a little more intrigue in the beginning with some questions (maybe they should be bigger to get their attention) Also wherever you have Grass Happens make it bold and another color (if possible)

    Tired of being a "weekend warrior?"
    Rather be putting around on the greens instead of your garden?
    Since 2005, Grass Happens has been consistently providing superior service with professional results.
    Our college educated staff utilizes proven horticultural practices to ensure your property receives the highest quality care available.
    Whether you desire weekly lawn maintenance, or
    a one-time landscaping service,
    Grass Happens is the only call you need to make!
    Grass Happens offers the following services:
    • Lawn maintenance
    • Lawn Aeration and Dethatching
    • Tree and Shrub Care
    • Landscape Design
    • Retaining walls and Paver instalation
     
  4. RGM

    RGM LawnSite Senior Member
    Male, from Baltimore Md
    Posts: 979

    i agree too much
     
  5. John Zaprala

    John Zaprala LawnSite Senior Member
    Posts: 283

    also it's installation not "instalation"
     
  6. John Zaprala

    John Zaprala LawnSite Senior Member
    Posts: 283

    Just an FYI, it's going to be hard to market retaining walls and paver installs when your name clearly states you're in the grass business. On the same token, maybe you should show some job photos of hardscapes in your ad to show what you're capable of. This way they will think differently about calling you for hardscapes.
     
  7. Fahzu

    Fahzu LawnSite Member
    Posts: 119

    A bit wordy in my opinion. I would put the services up top after a very brief introduction. I don't think flyers get very much attention. A couple seconds at best, so you'd better let them know what you are selling before they get bored.

    hope that helps.
     
  8. LonniesLawns

    LonniesLawns LawnSite Senior Member
    from KS
    Posts: 317

    Spend a $100 bucks or so and get it professioanally designed. It won't cost youa dime -- jsut an upfront investment in more work.

    I know when Iswitched to professioanlly designed flyers and advertisiemnts my ROI went through the roof!
     
  9. LonniesLawns

    LonniesLawns LawnSite Senior Member
    from KS
    Posts: 317

    Herw is just a real simple one I had designed once upon a time that might help you see the differenece

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  10. bohiaa

    bohiaa LawnSite Fanatic
    Posts: 5,220

    Dont advertise your Co name.......

    advertise WAHT you do,,,, and mainly What you CAN do for someone......

    like the above flyer his Word free is in very small print at the botton,,,

    FREE catches every eye...... it should be out in front......

    after you catch the eye then tell them WHAT you can do for them.........

    and be quick about it.....

    FREE Estimates... on lawn care....
     

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