Help with brain freeze on new 2008 biz cards

Discussion in 'Original Pictures Forum' started by Varsity L&G, May 15, 2008.

  1. Varsity L&G

    Varsity L&G LawnSite Senior Member
    Posts: 418

    I own a sign and graphics shop as well as LCO.

    Here is the problem I can create cards for everyone else but myself, give me some idea's here is were I am stuck at the font and layout is just there to give me something to go by and spacing.

    HELP*trucewhiteflag*

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  2. Firefighter337

    Firefighter337 LawnSite Senior Member
    Posts: 373

    I like it.

    I do not like being critical. But, is competive a word?
     
  3. Lawn Enforcer

    Lawn Enforcer LawnSite Silver Member
    Posts: 2,381

    I like it, a little typo, "competitive" Looks nice!
     
  4. esparzalandscaping

    esparzalandscaping LawnSite Member
    Posts: 85

    lulz @ competive.....
    why lawn chairs?
     
  5. chrisvinky

    chrisvinky LawnSite Senior Member
    Posts: 350

    I would change the black lettering to white to better contrast with the dark green background. Or you could fade the background at the bottom half of the card.
     
  6. Varsity L&G

    Varsity L&G LawnSite Senior Member
    Posts: 418

    That is funny you noticed that, When I do a layout spelling is of no concern and most of the time I end up with caps all over the place and words that are spelled sideways if you could do that.

    The look to me makes me think of relaxation. a place I would like to be sitting instead of mowing grass. That one photo can have a different meaning to each person.

    I just think something is missing, still tooling away at it.

    Will post a final when I get it finished.

    I hate doing these things for myself.
     
  7. Varsity L&G

    Varsity L&G LawnSite Senior Member
    Posts: 418

    Something is just not right, I need something under my name other then Owner, I always advise people not to put owner on there biz cards.

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  8. BryceBentleyLCS

    BryceBentleyLCS LawnSite Member
    Posts: 164

    Much better, I really like it :usflag:
     
  9. Raven386

    Raven386 LawnSite Silver Member
    from CT
    Posts: 2,160

    "for all of your Lawn & Landscape needs"

    - maybe change it from competitive pricing for prof. service to :

    Professional Services at competitive prices or Professional Service at an Affordable Price.
     
  10. Varsity L&G

    Varsity L&G LawnSite Senior Member
    Posts: 418

    The blue is Navy but on here it looks funny. LOL

    Next I have to layout a full color post card.

    We are out of everything and I think it is time to go full color card stock on everything to put us above the night riders.

    I want something that screams expensive so when they call they don't get sticker shock. We are not high but we also don't do yards for $25.
     

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