Help!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!

Discussion in 'Starting a Lawn Care Business' started by ubirajara83, Feb 7, 2007.

  1. ubirajara83

    ubirajara83 LawnSite Member
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  2. HOOLIE

    HOOLIE LawnSite Gold Member
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    The top looks really disjointed...you have the phone # to the left then your name to the right. I would at least put the number under the name. Also you want the top to be something catchy...something like "Free up your weekends" rather than your name...nobody cares about your name.

    I would also define "Free Cut"...specify when they get the free cut...
     
  3. ubirajara83

    ubirajara83 LawnSite Member
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    the top is like only on the pic bc i took a picture of the flyer that was on the my moniter
     
  4. HOOLIE

    HOOLIE LawnSite Gold Member
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    Not sure I understand? I'm just going off what you posted, if you have something different let me see it.

    As far as the top...for instance if it were McDonald's, they have brand recognition, everyone knows the golden arches and their name, but for an LCO this is not true...it seems at first to make sense to put your name on top but rather you want something to grab their attention and not throw it in the trash.
     
  5. d&rlawncare

    d&rlawncare LawnSite Senior Member
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    "10% off on
    extra services"

    This should say: "10% off all
    extra services"

    To say "off on" does not sound right. Or "save 10% on extra services"

    off on just sounds bad to me.
     
  6. ubirajara83

    ubirajara83 LawnSite Member
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    you are right thank you will change that.
     

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