honest opinions on this ad

Discussion in 'Starting a Lawn Care Business' started by Scagmower48, Mar 14, 2008.

  1. Scagmower48

    Scagmower48 LawnSite Senior Member
    Posts: 430

    THIS IS A POTENTIAL NEWSPAPER AD AND/OR HALF SHEET FLYER.

    give me your honest opinions on this ad/flyer please!
     

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  2. WALKER LANDSCAPE

    WALKER LANDSCAPE LawnSite Bronze Member
    Posts: 1,415

    Honestly it is pretty good I take it is going in newspaper correct. I would change the 50 percent to the first mowing with a acceptance of a season contract or agreement. My opinion.
     
  3. Scagmower48

    Scagmower48 LawnSite Senior Member
    Posts: 430

    thanks walker, the problem is i don't do contracts so i figured adding "new customers" to the coupon would make it sound better. This ad would be going in a newspaper and/or would be a half sheet flyer on colored paper.

    any other opinions?
     
  4. Supper Grassy

    Supper Grassy LawnSite Bronze Member
    Posts: 1,582

    Looks good.

    Just....I would put my phone # in stead of phone numbers go here
     
  5. EcoStar

    EcoStar LawnSite Member
    Posts: 20

    Do you maintain landscapes as well? I think I would replace "lawn maintenance" with "landscape maintenance" if so. You already have lawn mowing as your first bullet,which you might switch to "complete lawn care"

    Just my opinion
    Daniel
     
  6. EcoStar

    EcoStar LawnSite Member
    Posts: 20

    Maybe this will help
    Good luck
    Daniel
     

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  7. Scagmower48

    Scagmower48 LawnSite Senior Member
    Posts: 430

    thanks eco star for your changes on my ad. They do make it look better and more professional.
     
  8. Scagmower48

    Scagmower48 LawnSite Senior Member
    Posts: 430

    after thinking about the changes ecostar made for my ad, i decided that i will use them in my ad. these changes make me look a heck of alot more professional, while the old one basically said "HI my name is JOE BLOW and I want to mow your lawn" lol I might change one other thing, but thanks for the advice!
     
  9. Mark Bogart

    Mark Bogart LawnSite Member
    Posts: 174

    The one ecostar posted is a lot better.
     

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