How's this look?

Discussion in 'Business Operations' started by lawncare3, Feb 13, 2003.

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How do you like the flier?

  1. Love it

    2 vote(s)
    9.1%
  2. Like it

    3 vote(s)
    13.6%
  3. It's o.k.

    6 vote(s)
    27.3%
  4. Poor

    7 vote(s)
    31.8%
  5. Crap

    4 vote(s)
    18.2%
  1. lawncare3

    lawncare3 LawnSite Bronze Member
    Posts: 1,981

    Can you please send me your comments/ suggestions for this flier:
     

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  2. Phishook

    Phishook LawnSite Bronze Member
    Posts: 1,143

    Gator huh?
    Sounds like you're from FL.

    Muskie Mowing sounds more like your area.

    Then add some color. Maybe a tan background too.

    Then your name and # much larger. Your name not Gator. I take it you live with your parents, so I doubt everyone that's going to be working the phone will answer Gator Mowing.

    The rough edges look ok, you just need to finish it.

    Phone Number???

    That's how they'll find you.555-1212
     
  3. lawncare3

    lawncare3 LawnSite Bronze Member
    Posts: 1,981

    I have my own cell phone. I did this because I kept missing calls. I also think it looks more professional then using a home phone.

    Thanks for the reply. I will change it to muskie lawncare or something like that.

    I also will change the phone# size to about a 72 font.
     
  4. Barry D

    Barry D LawnSite Member
    from Georgia
    Posts: 44

    I like your flyer. It is simple and effective. This is a good example of the KISS method.

    Looks Great!!!
     
  5. Hamons

    Hamons LawnSite Senior Member
    Posts: 706

    My only thought is the graphic at the bottom does not ooze with confidence. It would make me think that I was hiring a 12 year old to cut my lawn

    I have found that hiring a professional to do the layout for my flyers has been the best money I ever spent. maybe just because I found somebody really good -- but ..... To me $50 dollars spent on a flyer design that is 2x as effective is definitely worthwhile.




    jeff hamons
    Hamons Custom Landscaping
    Overland Park, KS
     
  6. always do bright colors for spring
     
  7. 1stclasslawns

    1stclasslawns LawnSite Senior Member
    Posts: 565

    Get rid of the kid at the bottom.

    It only brings to truth the "lawn boy" image we are all trying to get rid of.
     
  8. walker-talker

    walker-talker LawnSite Platinum Member
    from Midwest
    Posts: 4,771

    Ditto!!!

    Other than that, looks pretty decent. I think you have a good start and better than others that I have seen. I am sure the more you make and more that you see, your flyers will improve.

    MATT
     
  9. bushwoods1

    bushwoods1 LawnSite Member
    Posts: 101

    Ditto the kid on the bottom has got to go. "Little boy" lawn service has a tough time in my area. Especialy when it's time to collect. Other than that, looks good, just add the phone number. :D
     
  10. Phishook

    Phishook LawnSite Bronze Member
    Posts: 1,143

    He is only 15!
     

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