intro flyer thoughts?

Discussion in 'Starting a Lawn Care Business' started by dapozer, Jan 5, 2006.

  1. dapozer

    dapozer LawnSite Member
    Posts: 52

    Since you guys have been real good with the info in the spring special thread I thought I would let you look at my Intro flyers and give feedback. This will done by door to door and some mail out. What do you think?

    Introducing
    GREEN by DESIGN
    For all your landscaping maintenance needs
    • Lawn mowing and maintenance
    • Fertilization with organic products
    • Aeration
    • Pet clean up
    • Sprinkler install, adjust, and repair
    • Edging and trimming
    • Garden bed maintenance (clean and mulch)
    • New lawn installation or remodel/repair
    • Snow removal
    • Minor fence/deck repairs and care
    • Free estimates
    • Insured
    GREEN by DESIGN
    Shawn West (303) 619-3917
    Ask about our SPRING SPECIAL!!

    The cross over did not get the font or structure of the flyer. It has GREEN by DESIGN in poprus font and green color and also has grass along the bottom.
     
  2. Reliable Lawns

    Reliable Lawns LawnSite Member
    Posts: 95

    Try and post an actual flyer for everyone to see, it may have an easier read to it. You do have alot of information to get out, just make sure it is reader friendly.
     
  3. MEDIC470

    MEDIC470 LawnSite Member
    Posts: 21

    You clean-up after their pets?? Are you in Connecticut? I'll hire you to mow my lawn!!:gunsfirin
     
  4. Soupy

    Soupy LawnSite Gold Member
    Posts: 3,125

    I would drop remodel from "New lawn installation or remodel/repair". Can you upload the flyer?
     
  5. get rich

    get rich LawnSite Member
    Posts: 195

    call it repair/rejuvenate
     
  6. grasshawg

    grasshawg LawnSite Member
    Posts: 17

    Make sure the graphics are bright and colorful and "jump out" at the reader. Don't get too wordy. Keep it short and to the point. Don't want the reader getting bored and wad it up and file it in #13! Maybe print it on colored paper instead of white. Those are my thoughts. Good luck!
     

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