Can anyone or everyone critique my service ltter that I will be sending to a few properties I would like to bid on this season. Be mean, I am not an english major and want some advice. So just lay it out on the line. Keep in mind I will be adding my logo at the top of the page. Also I have looked a few of the past posted letters. Fanatsy lawns posted a letter so I hope it was all right that I used a few of his ideas. February 02, 2002 Prperty Manager or Agent: Matthews Lawn Service would like to be considered for any lawn care or property maintenance bids concerning properties in your portfolio. Matthews Lawn Service strives for an excellent quality of work and customer relations, at the lowest price possible. I believe we could reduce your current rate by up to 10%. Changing to a new lawn care provider can be a little scary and hard to shop around for when most companies demand a full season agreement. Matthews Lawn Service offers a two week trial agreement to allow you to test our service before making any long term decisions. You will find that our knowledge, skill and experience in this field to be of exceptional quality at a fair price. We are able to provide lawn care for single family homes and buildings, condominiums, apartments, residential housing communities, and commercial properties. Our services include mowing, string trimming, edging, pruning, mulch application and removal. Matthews Lawn Service is fully insured. We serve all of madison and surrounding areas. I am always available for any questions, concerns or requests. We offer our clients discount rewards for referrals, and many payment options that will best suit you or your company. Spring is around the corner and hope to here from you soon! Have a great summer and I look forward to making your corner of the earth a greener place. Phone: (608) 438-1374 Matthews Lawn service Matthew Ruesch Owner Any advice on this would be great, this is only my second season and am still new at all this.