Letter to buisness's

Discussion in 'Lawn Mowing' started by turfcat75, Feb 23, 2001.

  1. turfcat75

    turfcat75 LawnSite Member
    Posts: 51

    I was wondering if i need to change or add anything Greetings,

    Need an experienced landscaper....want dependable snow removal?

    Call me for a free estimate for the services required.

    Seven years of experience in landscaping and snowplowing makes me qualified to please you.Please give me an opportunity to quote a price for dependable low cost service.

    If interested,please call me as noted above.

    References are available upon request.

    Hope to hear from you soon.

    Thanks,
    Mike
     
  2. Island Lawn

    Island Lawn LawnSite Senior Member
    Posts: 632

    go ahead and list a few specific qualifications other than just standing your years of experience out there by itself.

    Just my 2 pieces of copper coated zinc

    PS
    Looks more like a flyer than a letter?
     
  3. 1MajorTom

    1MajorTom Senior Moderator
    Posts: 6,074


    Too wordy of a letter is never good, but what you have there is not enough.

    Too many one lines. It needs to look more in a form of a professional letter.
    Too many mentions about calling.

    "Call for a free estimate" "Please call as noted above"
    "Hope to hear from you".

    I think a few copies of letters targeting businesses are floating around here on Lawnsite. Maybe someone can pull one up from the archives.

     

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