my first web page

Discussion in 'Digital Marketing' started by gglawns, Oct 22, 2005.

  1. gglawns

    gglawns LawnSite Member
    from Midwest
    Posts: 38

    please let me know what you think. would you change anything, add anything? i wanna hear the good and the bad as this is my first web site.

    http://www.greenergrasslawns.com
     
  2. ritchiem

    ritchiem LawnSite Member
    Posts: 58

    The site is looking good. Some suggestions;

    1. Clean up your text...on your sub title bar and titles for pages very pixelated.
    2. Some links to enlarge your photos dont work
    3. Make sure that you are using the same text size and type across the site.

    These are only my suggestions...however you are in the right direction.
     
  3. EliteImpressions

    EliteImpressions LawnSite Member
    from Jersey
    Posts: 215

    Looks very good.

    Add the comma in...After working with Greener Grass, you will
    realize that our attentive customer service and our
    quality workmanship make Greener Grass an excellent
    candidate for developing a business relationship with! You also might want to shorten this sentence a little.
     

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