My Flyer

Discussion in 'Starting a Lawn Care Business' started by TimmayB4, Mar 6, 2008.

  1. TimmayB4

    TimmayB4 LawnSite Member
    from OB,MS
    Posts: 56

  2. RGM

    RGM LawnSite Senior Member
    Male, from Baltimore Md
    Posts: 975

    very nice flyer
     
  3. covalawn

    covalawn LawnSite Member
    Posts: 32

    Nice looking Flyer/Postcard. I was looking at your website and you have a ton of spelling and grammatical errors.

    I always seem to "Maintenance" wrong so don't feel bad!
     
  4. instyle

    instyle LawnSite Senior Member
    from Canada
    Posts: 380

    It is a pet peve of mine..... why do people think landscaping and lawn care are the same thing? You say "Where reliable lawn care meets quality landscaping" (or something like that). But the two things are differant.

    Maybe it is the location differance, but in our Yellow pages, these are two seperate headings. Landscaping is one and Lawn Maintenance is the other.
     
  5. RWS

    RWS LawnSite Member
    Posts: 153

    Nice looking flyer
     
  6. TimmayB4

    TimmayB4 LawnSite Member
    from OB,MS
    Posts: 56


    Yea I know, I statyed up til 5 am getting everything done. I really appreciate your help. After some sleep I'm gonna give it another go. I can't believe you were able to get on the site and that it was already published. Thanks again for the input. I still need to edit and add more content and update all pics. Just a rough draft. I'm still trying to make it look more professional. Do you have any suggestions?
     
  7. TimmayB4

    TimmayB4 LawnSite Member
    from OB,MS
    Posts: 56

    Yes there seems to be some confusion there. That's why I said where the two "meet", you know lawn care and landscaping. Do you think it is still confusing? We just want our customers to know that we do both lawn care and landscaping. What are your thoughts?
     
  8. Sunstate Lawn

    Sunstate Lawn LawnSite Member
    Posts: 143

    I think it sounds fine. We in the industry tend to overthink it. Normal people will understand. I checked out your website. Looks good! Do the grammatical changes, I think thats a turnoff for some people.
    Flyer looks good too!
     
  9. deere615

    deere615 LawnSite Fanatic
    Posts: 5,676

    I like it Good job
     
  10. wintergreenlawn&landscape

    wintergreenlawn&landscape LawnSite Member
    from CT
    Posts: 175

    Ha Ha
    He said "Normal People"
    That just struck me funny!!
     

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