My new website check it out, tell me what you think

Discussion in 'Digital Marketing' started by groundskeeperllc, Jan 20, 2009.

  1. groundskeeperllc

    groundskeeperllc LawnSite Senior Member
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  2. Frue

    Frue LawnSite Bronze Member
    Posts: 1,472

    It looks great!
     
  3. Kiril

    Kiril LawnSite Fanatic
    Posts: 18,308

    Needs ALOT of work IMO.
     
  4. CGlandscaping

    CGlandscaping LawnSite Member
    Posts: 75

    looks good man. nice looking and simple to use!!!!!!!!! Ill tell you that what alot of people told me to do when i talked to them. They want an nice easy to use website that looks simple and nice without a bunch of clutter. I like how you have a bunch of pictures... I need more for my website
     
  5. Turboguy

    Turboguy LawnSite Bronze Member
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    I like your color scheme, your general layout and all the photos on the photo page.

    You do have a couple of typos.

    For instance you say "Mowing, Trimming, Edging, Flowerbed Edges, and blowing is our regular lawn service practices. It should be "are" not is.

    You say,

    Jonathon has grow up in the Green Industry his whole life. It should be "grown"

    There may be more, I just did a quick peek.

    I would suggest reworking some of the descriptions on the photo page. Much of it is ok, but a few could use tweeking. Like the one that says. "A lawn we cut"

    Your kids photos are really cute on the bottom of that page. You will likely get some flack from people who think that is out of place and too personal for a business website. My own feelings are that it is a nice touch. Made me want to call you to mow my lawn except being 1000 miles away is probably out of your territory. Nice looking kids.

    You need a little work on the meta tags. What you list for keywords would make a decent title in your meta tags. The title you have is really bad. Keywords are supposed to go something like this ' Lawn Mowing,Lake Charles, lawn services, lawn maintainence,lawn mowing in lake charles,lawn care,landscaping,lawn cutting ect. It is supposed to be a list of terms people might enter into a search engine in the hopes of finding someone like you.

    All in all it looks well above average for a do it yourself site but it does need some tweeking.
     
  6. TCO

    TCO LawnSite Member
    Posts: 25

    Looks Great!!
     
  7. ritchiem

    ritchiem LawnSite Member
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