my rough draft of my site is up. what changes should be made?

Discussion in 'Digital Marketing' started by grass disaster, Feb 28, 2010.

  1. grass disaster

    grass disaster LawnSite Silver Member
    Posts: 2,582

  2. WenzelOSLLC

    WenzelOSLLC LawnSite Senior Member
    Posts: 709

    Looks pretty good.

    I would say that it looks a little cookie cutter. Might want to see if you can spend a little bit on it and get the header where your company name is to look a little more personal, perhaps with a logo.

    And the gallery seems a little bit cheesy to me. If you could just post them on the page in a grid layout it might look a little better.

    Not bad otherwise. I'd say look at mine but my server is being kind of funny.
     
  3. grass disaster

    grass disaster LawnSite Silver Member
    Posts: 2,582

    yes thank you. i'm working on the header and them color.

    i'm also working on the gallery a little
     
  4. SeedPro

    SeedPro LawnSite Bronze Member
    Posts: 1,030

    Clients is spelled wrong on the testimonial page and make the tag line on the home page "Lawn" not Lawns plural. Most people only have one lawn.

    I actually kinda like that gallery flip deal.

    Good start.....keep tweaking and it will be fine.
     
  5. LouisianaLawnboy

    LouisianaLawnboy LawnSite Silver Member
    Posts: 2,199

    Spell check everything, and cut that old JD mower out. It looks ancient.
     
  6. WenzelOSLLC

    WenzelOSLLC LawnSite Senior Member
    Posts: 709

    I noticed the same thing. Made me chuckle a little. You gotta start somewhere tho, am I right?
     
  7. grass disaster

    grass disaster LawnSite Silver Member
    Posts: 2,582

    thats true. people probably think i mow with that and dont realize that thats and aerator attached.
     
  8. Jb3NH

    Jb3NH LawnSite Member
    Posts: 197

    services link on your opening page just refreshes page, connect link to http://www.grassmasterservice.com/services. I like the word jumble to cut down on spam on the contact us page. I think your on the right track, more pictures. An aerator pulling plugs, a guy mowing and a guy trimming etc. All in all its a good start.. my site is an ever evolving mess :)
     
  9. grass disaster

    grass disaster LawnSite Silver Member
    Posts: 2,582

    what are you using for a browser? it seems to be working fine on my computer and different browsers i have.
     
  10. Jb3NH

    Jb3NH LawnSite Member
    Posts: 197

    Oh hey my mistake. That link works just fine, i had multiple windows open and that comment was meant for another fella's website critique.
     

Share This Page