My Spring post card ad...input.

Discussion in 'Business Operations' started by A1Lawns, Mar 8, 2008.

  1. A1Lawns

    A1Lawns LawnSite Member
    Posts: 217

    I do not have a scanner so I am unable to upload exactly what the add looks like(color or format), so this is in TEXT ONLY.
    This is an add I simply made up on Microsoft Word and pass out to homes in my area. It is basic but I feel for a text only ad, it still conveys what I am trying to market. Also, it is just a 5 1/2 x 8 1/2 post card ad.
    Any input would be appreciated. Thanks! :cool2:

    This Year Leave Your Lawn Care To Someone You Can TRUST...
    Yadda Yadda Lawn Care
    Silly Town, CT
    Producing & Maintaining the Best Looking Lawns Around
    Mention This Ad And Receive $25 Off Services

    * Lawn Fertilizing Programs (See Why Our Lawn Care Program Is SECOND TO
    NONE For A Variety Of Reasons, Producing Beautiful, Dark Green Lawns)

    * Lawn Aerating (A Key Part To A GREAT Looking Lawn-Revitalize Your
    Lawn This Spring-FAST)

    * Professional Mowing (Always THOROUGH & NEAT)

    If you want reliable, friendly, professional, affordable service, where
    you will always speak with the owner, call for your free price quote.
    Licensed / Insured / References Always Available (or SAVE THIS AD For Future Savings)

    Call Craig @ (203) *** **** / 13 Years In Business
    Unhappy With Your Current Service? Call Us & We’ll Make The Switch Easy For You
     
  2. DuallyVette

    DuallyVette LawnSite Gold Member
    Posts: 3,293

    I'd use different words, and leave off all the "( )" 's
     
  3. A1Lawns

    A1Lawns LawnSite Member
    Posts: 217

    Thanks for your input.

    So what "different" words would you use and what's so bad about the "( )"?
     
  4. DuallyVette

    DuallyVette LawnSite Gold Member
    Posts: 3,293

    Take the weekend off, and leave the lawn care to US. ( cutting the grass is worth $30- time OFF...priceless... don't print the words inside parenthesis)
    Yadda Yadda Lawn Care
    Silly Town, CT


    *Professional Lawn Maintenance since 1994.


    *Fertilization & Weed control programs -designed to match your lawn.

    *Core Aeration- to improve your topsoil and develop a healthier, heartier, more deeply rooted lawn.

    We provide a reliable, friendly, professional,
    service,

    Call for your free price quote.

    Licensed / Insured / References Always Available

    Call Craig @ (203) *** ****



    Plenty of people won't like my design either, just my suggestions based on what you wanted to convey
     

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