Need your Reviews.

Discussion in 'Digital Marketing' started by Perfect touch landscapes, Feb 12, 2010.

  1. Perfect touch landscapes

    Perfect touch landscapes LawnSite Senior Member
    Posts: 254

    Please Critique our webcite.
    Tell me what you like and dislike.
    Thank you for your time.

    This site is under construction.
     
  2. LawnoftheMonth

    LawnoftheMonth LawnSite Senior Member
    Posts: 355

    Looks good! you have a lot of info and things to click, good job. What did that cost you?
     
  3. Perfect touch landscapes

    Perfect touch landscapes LawnSite Senior Member
    Posts: 254

    made it my self, but i need some work
    WHat do you like or dislike about it?
    What would you change?
    I need some input.
     
  4. Perfect touch landscapes

    Perfect touch landscapes LawnSite Senior Member
    Posts: 254

  5. topsites

    topsites LawnSite Fanatic
    Posts: 21,654

    That's pretty good, I'm not usually impressed...

    On another note nice captcha, unless things have changed in recent years that's no beginner trick...
    So is it php or asp based?

    Dang, I thought when you said you made it, that meant you coded it...
    That's kind of a downer lol, but it does make up for it some in looks.

    Yeah, they all do that.

    This part:
    Thank You Springfield For Your Support And Business.
    ... The word Springfield Links to the Contact page?

    Kind of makes me go Wtf...
    I would just get rid of the link itself as a quick fix, leave the word but don't link it.

    Then...
    I didn't take a really good long look at it, but I would recommend you go through it
    and see if you find more stuff like what I just pointed out, that ought to give
    you some things to do.

    Tweak it out some, get the very bottom part to line up, maybe the top menu to fit all in 1 line too.

    Peace out
     
    Last edited: Feb 13, 2010
  6. Perfect touch landscapes

    Perfect touch landscapes LawnSite Senior Member
    Posts: 254

    Thanks, I am trying to have a SEO modify it.
    Over all what were you impressed about?
    I think i have To much info.
    These days you got to sell yourself and what you do more then ever.
    It is so hard for me to Present my company in 20 words.
     
  7. SchnabelLawnCare

    SchnabelLawnCare LawnSite Senior Member
    Posts: 709

    Grammar:

    Under "why choose us?" on the first page, it's "no job too big or small, not to.

    Go through a few times, slowly reading each word. Check for punctuation, too.
     
  8. Perfect touch landscapes

    Perfect touch landscapes LawnSite Senior Member
    Posts: 254

    Other then grammar , what did you think about it?
     
  9. bamamike

    bamamike LawnSite Member
    Posts: 77

    I’d say

    “ Perfect Touch Lawn and Landscaping is a full-service company that can offer you a piece of mind knowing that your lawn or any landscaping project will always be in Perfect Touch. With a Perfect Touch, we will design and install four season plants, flowers and trees that will give you joy and inspiration year after year.

    No more hassle or worries. We will maintain all plants flowers and tree’s to looks its best even if not installed with a Perfect Touch.

    Just like the Perfect Touch, you will be surprised with our quality and customer service while still offering competitive prices. “

    The more times you say your company name the more of a chance someone will remember it. You just don’t want to be annoying by saying it too much
     
  10. Perfect touch landscapes

    Perfect touch landscapes LawnSite Senior Member
    Posts: 254

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