OK Gang. I'm working on a new card for another mail-out, and I need your help. This is how the card looks so far, but the pictures will be rearranged or changed as needed. What I need right now is some good, constructive criticism. Specifically for the front of the card. I'm trying to think of some kind of new tag line so the front won't be so plain looking, but I am stumbling. Some of the ideas I've got have been stolen (either out of stuff I've seen in the past, or from dreams I have had) the ideas for tag lines are as follows: None Illuminate your dreams Curb Appeal Curb appeal...defined Architectural and Landscape Lighting Experience the difference Specializing in Creative Lighting Design Be the envy of your neighborhood Beauty...Security...Value Beautify Your Home While Protecting Your Family! Embracing The Night The fine art of landscape illumination Discreet.... Elegant.... Inviting... "The Premier Outdoor Lighting Solution" Discover the Richness of the Night... Professional Outdoor Lighting.... Professional Outdoor Lighting... .....adds Beauty, Security & Value Bringing Your Home to Light Anything anyone else has to offer would be great. I've done so many of these now that it is all starting to become fuzzy to me and nothing looks interesting anymore. Please help if you can.