New company, new ad

Discussion in 'Original Pictures Forum' started by TTS, Jul 14, 2013.

  1. TTS

    TTS LawnSite Senior Member
    Posts: 615

    Just thought I'd throw up a new ad I'm running. Just started my company kind of late in the season so I won't push real hard until fall clean ups start. This is posted on our facebook page, on craigslist and print versions on several bulletin boards around town.

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  2. SRT8

    SRT8 LawnSite Bronze Member
    from CA
    Posts: 1,296

    Looks good! Really like the logo
     
  3. TTS

    TTS LawnSite Senior Member
    Posts: 615

    Thanks, marrying a graphic designer is paying dividends already
     
  4. Triton2286

    Triton2286 LawnSite Member
    Posts: 215

    Nice, clean and simple!
     
  5. tonygreek

    tonygreek LawnSite Gold Member
    Posts: 3,480

    As it doesn't seem you're looking for feedback, I'll just point out that you have a typo in the "for whatever our customers needs may be" line.
     
  6. TTS

    TTS LawnSite Senior Member
    Posts: 615

    I'm taking feedback what's the typo? Should there be an apostrophe in customers and is it before or after the s? I never understood that possessive stuff in school
     
  7. Porkins

    Porkins LawnSite Senior Member
    Posts: 255

    For the next batch I would use "all of" instead of "whatever"
     
  8. tonygreek

    tonygreek LawnSite Gold Member
    Posts: 3,480

    customers'
     
  9. TTS

    TTS LawnSite Senior Member
    Posts: 615

    Its not too late for a next batch now. Keep the advice coming and I will podt the updates when its done. The only money I have into this is the cost of printing so its really negligible to change it
     
  10. TTS

    TTS LawnSite Senior Member
    Posts: 615

    Thanks tony. I hope I do better with lawn care than I do English or this could be rough
     

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