New contract - what do you think

Discussion in 'Business Operations' started by fairwayCuts, Jan 25, 2005.

  1. fairwayCuts

    fairwayCuts LawnSite Member
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    I've been trying to wright up an agreement for this year and have finally compiled a draft. It's a cobination of my work and a template from the Gopher website. I had my accountant read over it and she though the wording was very dificult. I don't get this feeling though. Mabey I'm not good at english ;) :dizzy: .

    Feel free to use this as a draft for yourself if you'd like.
     

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  2. HOOLIE

    HOOLIE LawnSite Gold Member
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    What did the accountant mean by "difficult"? It looks pretty good to me. I mean, it wasn't filled with a bunch of "legal-ese" type words.
     
  3. PLM-1

    PLM-1 LawnSite Bronze Member
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    From Notes to Service Agreement on needs a little work. I'm pretty good at English and it does get a little bit tough. Punctuation needs help too which is part of the problem. Just trying to be critical...nothing personal. Don't take any offense!
     
  4. PLM-1

    PLM-1 LawnSite Bronze Member
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    couldn't PM it to you so here you go...
     

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  5. fairwayCuts

    fairwayCuts LawnSite Member
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    I think she thought that some of the wording wasn't correct. Ending sentences with a preposition :dizzy: , wrong use of some words ;). I don't know, I just about flunked English in school :help: .
     
  6. fairwayCuts

    fairwayCuts LawnSite Member
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    Thnaks for all the revisions :D . After reading your copy, a lot of it seems to go smoother.
     
  7. Lux Lawn

    Lux Lawn LawnSite Silver Member
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    Fairway
    New contract looks good,that is something I am starting to work on as well.Gophers templates is where I am starting and getting ideas from others.
     
  8. Smithers

    Smithers LawnSite Silver Member
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    you can not attach files in a PM.
     
  9. Smithers

    Smithers LawnSite Silver Member
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    i like the original. instead of a watermark logo, i'd put it on top.

    also, you mention weather conditions in the 1st paragrapgh and then something similar in the middle.good work
     

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