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Discussion in 'Landscape Architecture and Design' started by nateb, May 22, 2009.
Hey I just wanted to get some feedback on my new flyer. Give me the good and the bad.
looks pretty good.
Thanks for the feed back. Keep'em coming
Fresno? Clovis here. Hows business for you guys?
Not bad. simple. to the point, and will be cheap to print.
I would make it a color flyer instead of black and white and remove one of the no jobs to big or small, you have it twice on the page. Other then that looks ok. Are you going to pin them up in stores or hand them out? Reason I ask if your handing them out I would remove the tear offs with the number across the bottom to me that always looks tacky. Just a thought!
Thanks for all the great info. We will be passing them out(with out the tear offs) and placing the on bulletin boards and the community mail boxes.
this is how I would have changed it...
here it is, with the help of everyone, the final flyer revision
check your formatting, doesn't look quite right.
otherwise, good luck with it =)