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New Flyers. Opinions Please!

Discussion in 'Lawn Mowing' started by Eddie B, Mar 11, 2005.

  1. Eddie B

    Eddie B LawnSite Senior Member
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    2 Flyers, 1st will go to homes, the 2nd one has pull-tabs and will be placed on bulliten boards in grocery store entrances, etc. Tell me what you think, and what I need to do. I've got 5,000 sheets of paper here and a fresh toner cartridge just dying to get used. Thanks! :p
     
  2. proenterprises

    proenterprises LawnSite Silver Member
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    where is it?

    nevermind, found it.
     
  3. proenterprises

    proenterprises LawnSite Silver Member
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    They are both the same when I click on them. You are missing dashes between lines. I would list them in a bullet form rather than accross on a line, looks better that way. Put "a" free estimate rather than "your" free estimate.
     
  4. Eddie B

    Eddie B LawnSite Senior Member
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    is the picture showing up at the bottom of the first flyer? 1st flyer should have a picture, 2nd should have tabs.
     
  5. twins_lawn_care

    twins_lawn_care LawnSite Senior Member
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    the first flyer is putting the picture on a second page
    the picture itself, looks nice, but the one stepping stone doesn't appear to be blown off, and looks like this company didn't do a complete job. I'd be hesitant to use that picture myself for this fact, that it stands out.
     
  6. LB1234

    LB1234 LawnSite Gold Member
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    Sorry, but IMHO, the flyers need a lot of work. Perform a search and read/view others flyers here on LS. Get some ideas and read the feedback they received.
     
  7. ztoro

    ztoro LawnSite Senior Member
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    wording is good.. but the design is Blah...... If you want people to remember you or take a second look at your flyer try to dress it up a bit... I think Gopher has some free flyers..
     
  8. Eddie B

    Eddie B LawnSite Senior Member
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    thanks guys... I was considering a new photo myself. This was taken after a landscape job, not a mow job.
     
  9. twins_lawn_care

    twins_lawn_care LawnSite Senior Member
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    here's a quick and dirty just to throw out some ideas for you. kind of covered up the bad part of the pic.

    bailey.jpg
     
  10. Eddie B

    Eddie B LawnSite Senior Member
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    wow... thanks twins. I'm limited to black and white printing at the moment. That would fit perfect for a post card. Looks really well. I've dug up another lawn pic.
     

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