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New Website, looking for some feedback on pictures etc.

Discussion in 'Digital Marketing' started by Pjslawncare, May 21, 2008.

  1. Pjslawncare

    Pjslawncare LawnSite Member
    Posts: 63

    New Website, looking for some feedback on pictures etc. PJSLAWNCARE.COM
     
  2. Kressious

    Kressious LawnSite Member
    Posts: 10

    In the top picture? What is that on the bottom of it? Corrugated pipe with dead roses? I'd crop that part out.

    The pictures look fine other than the top one.

    You might want to add some navigation and more content to the website. That will give customers a little more to look at and they will stay on your page longer.
     
  3. B & B Yardscape

    B & B Yardscape LawnSite Member
    Posts: 131

    talk about keeping it simple.

    accommodate is spelled wrong toward the bottom.

    Take a new picture standing in front of the burn barrel

    YOU HAVE:
    we'll remove your waste with our seasonal grounds clean-ups.

    I WOULD PUT
    we will remove the waste with a seasonal or scheduled clean-up.


    YOU HAVE: Fertilization: Having trouble keeping your grass healthy this season? Let us fertilize your lawn at a cheap rate.

    I WOULD PUT: Fertilization: Is your grass as green and thick as you would like it? Let us fertilize your lawn at a competitive rate.

    I would add what locations you cover.

    Good Luck
     
  4. Jb3NH

    Jb3NH LawnSite Member
    Posts: 197

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