New website!

Discussion in 'Digital Marketing' started by okeefl, Dec 28, 2007.

  1. okeefl

    okeefl LawnSite Member
    Posts: 155

    Take a look and tell me what you think. It is my first attempt with a free program I got with my new laptop from Dell.

    www.paradiselandservices.com
     
  2. Bill S

    Bill S LawnSite Member
    Posts: 184

    I would remove the web search, you don't want people leaving your site plus it isn't in a good spot even if you did want to keep it. I would also lose the "hit counter." It serves no purpose.
     
  3. Plant Buyer 83

    Plant Buyer 83 LawnSite Member
    Posts: 176

    "Browse thru our site and if you would like an estimate or consultation call us at (863) 634-1479."

    I am sure you are trying to promote professionalism so please spell through correctly.

    Just a quick fix - under the our services section the * for lawn maintenance is not on the same line.

    Although for you doing this on your on time and with a free program it looks pretty good. Maybe add a picture section, specifically of some installs you did.

    Matt
     
  4. lawnjockey56

    lawnjockey56 LawnSite Member
    Posts: 227

    http://www.m-w.com/dictionary/thru
    he's fine from what i see :)
     
  5. okeefl

    okeefl LawnSite Member
    Posts: 155

    Thanks for the input. After looking at the screen for a couple of hours its easy to miss those small things.

    As far as THRU vs. THROUGH I'll have to research that one.

    I went thru the drive-thru
    I went through the drive-thru
    I went through the drive-through
    I threw it through the drive-thru...........

    I give up.
     
  6. okeefl

    okeefl LawnSite Member
    Posts: 155

    I cannot remove the search option with this program, but I understand what you are saying.
     
  7. okeefl

    okeefl LawnSite Member
    Posts: 155

    I do not see what you are refering to on the * not being on the same line.

    I am working on more pictures, just wanted to get each homeowners permission first.
     
  8. Plant Buyer 83

    Plant Buyer 83 LawnSite Member
    Posts: 176

    Our Services

    * <----
    Lawn Maintenance <-----
    * Ornamental Maintenance
    * Landscape Design & Installation
    * Mulch & Rock Installation
    * Sod Installation & Renovations
    * Tree Trimming

    Maybe it is just my comp but this is how i see it.

    As far as thru vs through I have thought about this for a lil and I have no idea which is correct so keep it as is.
     
  9. okeefl

    okeefl LawnSite Member
    Posts: 155

    It must be on your computer.

    I changed thru to through and I think it looks better.
     
  10. okeefl

    okeefl LawnSite Member
    Posts: 155

    Added a new page.
     

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