Opinion on "business motto"

Discussion in 'Lawn Mowing' started by dr grass, Dec 2, 2002.

  1. dr grass

    dr grass Banned
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    hey all ... just wanted to get some opinions on a motto that came to me earlier today. its at the bottom of this post next to LawnPRO, Inc. let me know what you think. thanks in advance...



    shep :blush:
     
  2. Swampbeast

    Swampbeast LawnSite Senior Member
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    Well, I like it. Its good. I give it a thumbs up.
     
  3. AztlanLC

    AztlanLC LawnSite Bronze Member
    Posts: 1,046

    That's what I used to do and couldn't never sleep, not because it wasn't right but because it wasn't perfect.

    Good night!;)
     
  4. dr grass

    dr grass Banned
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    thanks for the input ...... :D




    shep :alien:
     
  5. Albemarle Lawn

    Albemarle Lawn LawnSite Bronze Member
    Posts: 1,544

    Gets rid of bagged clippings by dumping them at the front doorstep of disgruntled customers.

    Nobody will squeak when they here about your policy.


    or try...

    You WILL love our service...or we break your kneecaps.
     
  6. gogetter

    gogetter Banned
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    Alright, I'm gonna be the negative nancy here. I'm not crazy about it.
    Can't put my finger on what it is that I don't like.
    It kinda seems over the top. I mean really, if my plumber couldn't sleep at night unless it's done right, I would think he was kinda strange LOL!.

    I'd go with something more like "We're not happy until you are". I know it's not exactly orignal, but it's buyable.

    Sorry, but you asked.
     
  7. f350

    f350 Banned
    from mi
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    shep how about, get a hair cut and a real job you hippy!!
    j/k
     
  8. TJLC

    TJLC LawnSite Bronze Member
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    Not bad, but how about "good is never cheap and cheap is never good"
     
  9. GarPA

    GarPA LawnSite Silver Member
    from PA
    Posts: 2,585

    dr grass...I like the "theme" you are trying to convey in that your focus is doing all you can do to please them...but I dont care for the "we can't sleep......." part....its a bit too much to be believeable. just some ideas that I gave about 2 seconds thought to in the theme you want to do:
    "Your satisfaction is OUR business"
    "Nobody does it better"
    "We care about your property...and it shows!"
    "We worry about your property so you don't have to"
    " We like what we do...and it shows!!!"
     
  10. FrankenScagMachines

    FrankenScagMachines LawnSite Platinum Member
    from IN
    Posts: 4,739

    Mine's on my signature. Shep, it's OK. GarPA, honestly bud yours aren't any better IMO. I'm not starting a pissing match JMO...
    Eric
     

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