1.) Why not? 2.) The door hanger reinforces this claim. A paid designer did this? You really should find someone else. I was assuming that was a DIY effort. To think that you seem to be paying for it really concerns me. If I get 5 door hangers hanging from the knob, and 4 of them look like they are from professional-appearing companies, those 4 have the leg up. If I am looking for discount lawn care, you're the company I'm calling, because that's the image you're presenting me. Use that Google Image Search query, compare your mock up to those, and you'll see what I mean. Regarding the grammar and punctuation issues (if I'm incorrect, no disrespect is intended), I get the sense that English might not be your first language. If it's not, the issues are perfectly understandable. If you need an assist on that, feel free to shoot me a PM.