Please Critique

Discussion in 'Business Operations' started by jpmako, Feb 6, 2006.

  1. jpmako

    jpmako LawnSite Senior Member
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    This is a rough draft of the letter that I want to send out to my Snow Removal Clients that do not currently use my company for other services.


    I would appreciate some feedback and of course all are welcome to use/ modify to suit your needs.

    Thanks,
    Jason
     

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  2. DynaMow

    DynaMow LawnSite Senior Member
    Posts: 570

    i like it, great idea. have nothing bad to say about it. I would use it.
     
  3. Jpocket

    Jpocket LawnSite Silver Member
    Posts: 2,278

    It is very ell written, I would use it.
     
  4. Gatewayuser

    Gatewayuser LawnSite Bronze Member
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    Yes, great job! I think I might use some of it if you don't mind.:D
     
  5. jpmako

    jpmako LawnSite Senior Member
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    I don't mind if anyone uses it!
    Thanks for the replies.

    Jason
     
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  7. work_it

    work_it LawnSite Senior Member
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    I like the letter and like the website too. Nice and clean. Easy to read, and really like the Chevy truck with the plow.
     

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