Questions about flyer text

Discussion in 'Lawn Mowing' started by GTLC, Mar 30, 2004.

  1. GTLC

    GTLC LawnSite Senior Member
    Posts: 700

    Hey guys this may be a stupid question, but I am making my new flyer and was wondering what sounds better and more professional to put on the flyer

    "Lawnmowing" or just "mowing"

    "Spring/Fall Clean-up", "Spring & Fall Clean-up" or
    "Seasonal Clean-up"

    Thanks
     
  2. GTLC

    GTLC LawnSite Senior Member
    Posts: 700

    And would you consider pruning and hedge trimming just "pruning"?
     
  3. sgallaher

    sgallaher LawnSite Senior Member
    Posts: 265

    I would just list the services that you provide:

    Mowing
    Trimming
    landscaping
    Hardscaping of brick paver patios, sidewalks, and walls
    Spring Clean-up
    Fall clean-up


    And so on.....
     
  4. GTLC

    GTLC LawnSite Senior Member
    Posts: 700

    Well I am listing more than that, but what I really meant was which wording out of the choices sounds better and more professional.
     
  5. GTLC

    GTLC LawnSite Senior Member
    Posts: 700

    How about "aeration" or "lawn aeration"
    or "aerating" or "lawn aerating"?????

    ??????????
     
  6. LawnCrafters

    LawnCrafters LawnSite Member
    Posts: 133

    "Core Aeration"
     
  7. harryhomeowner

    harryhomeowner LawnSite Member
    Posts: 140

    My $.02.

    Please get the spelling right. If your not going to be detail oriented enough to get your flyer correct are going to be detail oriented enough to do a good job at my house?

    Got one today they are "liscensed & Insurd"...
     
  8. Runner

    Runner LawnSite Fanatic
    Posts: 13,494

    Yep. Just go with Mowing. Aeration is Core Aeration. For the shrub trimming, I just put Shrubbery and Ornamental Care. For the Clean-ups, I say Spring & Fall Cleanups.
    Actually, what mine reads, is:
    *Customized Fertilizer Programs
    *Weed, Insect, and Disease Control
    *Commercial & Residential
    *Complete Lawn & Landscape Maintenance
    * Lawn Renovation / Seeding / Sodding
    *Core Aeration
    *Spring & Fall Cleanup
    These are some of what are listed on the back of my card.
     

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