Separate names with a comma.
Discussion in 'Lawn Mowing' started by paridise, Feb 28, 2005.
Let me know what i need to do to make it better
IMO I would change the "if you have any questions" part to something like Call today for your free no obligation estimate. Every thing else looks OK
I would change some of the wording in this section as well:
At Paridise Landscaping we take pride in quality and dependable service. As a special offer if you sign up for our yearly program before March 20, you will receive a 15% discount.
Paridise Landscaping offers high quality, dependable service.
One another line or in a different font I would then apply your discount.
At the end you might want to consider something like:
Call today for a free onsite consultation.
Not bad though, you have the right idea.
How many do you plan on sending out?
FYI...Paradise not paridise.
i don't see alot of flyers in my area but when i do there is always some kind of "deal". good luck with the deal i don't need to offer reductions and if you work hard and have great service you won't need to discount your hard work either.
That was my question too...Are you mispelling the name on purpose?
Customers might find this a bit odd.....I sure did