Separate names with a comma.
Discussion in 'Business Operations' started by MCS Lawn Care, Jan 14, 2004.
what do you guys think?
In order to serve you better I have set up an E-mail account thought Yahoo.Com so you can have one more way for you to reach, should you need to, that address is MCSLawnRescue@yahoo.com
Read this sentence out loud...it does not make sense and is gramatically incorrect.
at Yahoo.com so you will have an additional outlet for contact if needed
For your convenience, I have set up an E-mail address where you will be able to reach me also. The address is-----bla bla- bla
Do you want that not in there?
Here are a few changes i made
well, i did add a spelling eror in there! lol but also made changes to the structure and formating of the letter. Hope that helps.
that looks real good. simple and to the point.
It still needs some revision and in your title it should be NJ both in caps.
Here is the letter I used last year. I am currently making revisions, as some of our services/policies have changed.