Sprin letter

Discussion in 'Business Operations' started by MCS Lawn Care, Jan 14, 2004.

  1. MCS Lawn Care

    MCS Lawn Care LawnSite Member
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    what do you guys think?
     

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  2. rodfather

    rodfather LawnSite Fanatic
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    In order to serve you better I have set up an E-mail account thought Yahoo.Com so you can have one more way for you to reach, should you need to, that address is MCSLawnRescue@yahoo.com


    Read this sentence out loud...it does not make sense and is gramatically incorrect.
     
  3. satxmow

    satxmow LawnSite Member
    from tx
    Posts: 51

    at Yahoo.com so you will have an additional outlet for contact if needed
     
  4. Premo Services

    Premo Services LawnSite Bronze Member
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    For your convenience, I have set up an E-mail address where you will be able to reach me also. The address is-----bla bla- bla
     
  5. Team Gopher

    Team Gopher LawnSite Platinum Member
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    Hi Chris,

    Do you want that not in there?
     
  6. trimmasters

    trimmasters LawnSite Senior Member
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    Here are a few changes i made
     

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  7. trimmasters

    trimmasters LawnSite Senior Member
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    well, i did add a spelling eror in there! lol but also made changes to the structure and formating of the letter. Hope that helps.
     
  8. satxmow

    satxmow LawnSite Member
    from tx
    Posts: 51

    that looks real good. simple and to the point.:p
     
  9. Turfdude

    Turfdude LawnSite Bronze Member
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    It still needs some revision and in your title it should be NJ both in caps.
     
  10. Expert Lawns

    Expert Lawns LawnSite Silver Member
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    Here is the letter I used last year. I am currently making revisions, as some of our services/policies have changed.
     

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