What do youu think of this fall flyer?

Discussion in 'Business Operations' started by Logsdonlawncare, Sep 4, 2004.

  1. Logsdonlawncare

    Logsdonlawncare LawnSite Member
    from Iowa
    Posts: 23

    This is my first thread and first year doing fall cleanup, so bear with me. Just wanted to know if this flyer looks professional or kindergarten looking? Thanks for all of the input. You guys are great!!

    fall flyer small.jpg
     
  2. qualitylandscaping

    qualitylandscaping LawnSite Bronze Member
    Posts: 1,581

    looks good.. nice work
     
  3. Precision

    Precision LawnSite Silver Member
    Posts: 2,995

    personally I wouldn't advertise discounts for seniors or neighbors. That seems to bring out the cheapskates and time wasters. Same thing with affordable rates. I don't know what that means, but for many people it means an opportunity to beat you up on price.

    Also list your home number as the office number, unless it is likely to be answered by a little kid or something.

    I might also put
    Do you like bug bites and blisters
    If not,
    leave the leaves to us.

    and get rid of the smaller line about bugs and blisters.

    Good luck hope this helps
     
  4. beransfixitinc

    beransfixitinc LawnSite Senior Member
    Posts: 592

    I'd move that one leaf up out of the area code in the phone number though.
     
  5. economiclawncare

    economiclawncare LawnSite Member
    Posts: 143

    i thinks it looks good but would take off home # and remove discount. Having home number looks unprofessional. IMO
     
  6. Logsdonlawncare

    Logsdonlawncare LawnSite Member
    from Iowa
    Posts: 23

    OK here is the updated version....

    fall flyer 3 small.jpg
     
  7. Logsdonlawncare

    Logsdonlawncare LawnSite Member
    from Iowa
    Posts: 23

    And i changed home to office..thanks for the replys guys
     
  8. qualitylandscaping

    qualitylandscaping LawnSite Bronze Member
    Posts: 1,581

    too much yellow..
     
  9. chefdrp

    chefdrp LawnSite Bronze Member
    Posts: 1,384

    it looks good to me.
     
  10. lawn

    lawn LawnSite Senior Member
    Posts: 344

    I like it a lot, the only thing I will hesitate to leave is the Cell number. i would like to leave just the office numbers.
    By the way how did you make it? I want to do something similar but I do not know how.
     

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