what you think of flyer

Discussion in 'Business Operations' started by JTS Landscaping lawn, Apr 21, 2008.

  1. JTS Landscaping lawn

    JTS Landscaping lawn LawnSite Senior Member
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    seeing what your guys think of this flyer found this templete and put my stuff in it.
     

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  2. grassrangers

    grassrangers LawnSite Member
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    where is the name of your business? i had to fumble through the whole flyer to find it... thats just for starts
     
  3. BillyRgn

    BillyRgn LawnSite Member
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    be carefull with advertising for fertlizing if you don't have a license
     
  4. jwillaford

    jwillaford LawnSite Member
    Posts: 12

    A couple of thoughts from a graphic designer.
    • Proofread it. There are errors.
    • Times New Roman is not the best choice. Don't go wild with fonts. Just a simple, yet unique font will do.
    • It sounds a little like your begging. "I'll do anything you want" communicates "I need your work." The phrase "Available to serve the outdoor needs of our customer" communicates we value you and want to help you in any way we can. People don't want to go to a business who needs their work to stay alive. They want to go to a stable company who has plenty of customers.
    • I don't want to sound mean, but the design wasn't that great. Remember that the design reflects the quality of work you deliver. Don't let a so-so design inaccurately reflect you.

      Hope this was helpful.
     

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