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Bid Cover Letter

Discussion in 'Business Operations' started by bob, Dec 17, 2002.

  1. bob

    bob LawnSite Platinum Member
    from DE
    Messages: 4,261

    Do you enclose a cover letter with your bid?

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  2. bob

    bob LawnSite Platinum Member
    from DE
    Messages: 4,261

    Tell me what you think about the above cover letter?
     
  3. kris

    kris LawnSite Bronze Member
    from nowhere
    Messages: 1,578

    Sorry Bob ... don't like it.


    there are some serious punctuation etc problems with it.
     
  4. bob

    bob LawnSite Platinum Member
    from DE
    Messages: 4,261

    Kris, it's not mine. It belongs to a friend of mine who sent it to a prospective customer.
     
  5. rodfather

    rodfather LawnSite Fanatic
    Messages: 9,501

    It's terrible. If I received something like that as a prospective customer, I would have serious doubts about that company's ability to service my account.
     
  6. scott's turf

    scott's turf LawnSite Senior Member
    from NH
    Messages: 949

    Yes it needs a grammar check and there are only a couple sentences on it!
     
  7. Scraper

    Scraper LawnSite Bronze Member
    Messages: 1,656

    Ditto what Rodfather said. It reads as though it was written by a high school dropout.
     
  8. cos

    cos LawnSite Addict
    Messages: 1,253

    Bob,

    I will e-mail you one that I did and had success with in the past. That cover letter is simply....well,...... horrible. I know your punctuation and ability to put a complete sentence together is better than that!
     
  9. OBRYANMAINT

    OBRYANMAINT LawnSite Senior Member
    Messages: 555

    I always include one
     
  10. Kent Lawns

    Kent Lawns LawnSite Senior Member
    from Midwest
    Messages: 870

    I sometimes with this forum had two segments:

    One for professionals, the other for uneducated guys trying to earn a buck.

    That letter is a total joke.
     

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