tough to tell wout seeing what the lawn and leaves look like but your hourly rate is fair.if your ever unsure of the price on cleanups than keep it on the highside,because you dont want the work if your gonna just bairly make proffit. thats hard work, customers have to realize they are paying for a professional service.
i dont mind so much a little dickerin on lawn prices but nothing makes me more mad than when a customer tries to cut down my prices on work like cleanups and such.it seems like some people just think they shoulldent have to pay for lawn services.
sorry to get off the subject but anyway thats my advice.
cleanups are a pain in the rear. its hard to say if what you quoted is fair or way under. how many hours do you think it will take you clean the lawn and leaves? based on what i see so far, i'd say no less then $500.. give us some more details and we'll be able to better estimate.
I prefer to use the bags. I think it looks better then the bulk mulch(my opinion). Usually doesn't have the dirt and other debris in it. Also, if I have any left over and the homeowner doesn't want it. I can store that very easily.