my post card

Discussion in 'Business Operations' started by jpang115, Mar 6, 2008.

  1. jpang115

    jpang115 LawnSite Member
    Messages: 50

    hey everyone i would like some feedback on my post card that i plan on using this year..let me know what you think.

    thanks in advance - jim

    pangburn postcard front.png

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  2. Guzman Properties

    Guzman Properties LawnSite Senior Member
    Messages: 443

    Colors look great, makes the picture look 3-D. All I think you should do is put a period on the top sentence and capitalize the "To". Same with the back of the card, check your grammer. Other than that looks great, simple yet informative.

    Good luck!
  3. mowerbrad

    mowerbrad LawnSite Fanatic
    Messages: 6,268

    Very nice, should get you a few more customers.
  4. badassgrass

    badassgrass LawnSite Member
    Messages: 42

    Nice to see something that doesn't have a big *** mower on the front which not one customer cares about. They do want what is on your card. Like Guzman said the sentence on the back is not correct. "YOU WORK HARD ALL WEEK. WHY SPEND YOUR WEEKENDS DOING YARD WORK LEAVE THE YARD WORK TO US SO YOU CAN ENJOY YOUR WEEKEND!"

    Need a "?" after "Why spend your weekends doing yard work?" Great card simple and not a lot to read. Also, question marks draw the reader into the sentence.
  5. Dynamic

    Dynamic LawnSite Member
    Messages: 147

    Great pic, you should have some good luck with that. Its nice and simple and not to busy like other ones. Good luck.
  6. matt spinniken

    matt spinniken LawnSite Senior Member
    Messages: 323

    To me, with those lines, you seem like you are selling the prospective client on lawn care in general and not something that shows them you are better than your competition. Wouldnt every lawn company free up peoples time?

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