My fear is that the "designer" isn't actually a graphic designer and is more of a "logo put together'er". Local sign guy would be my first guess. Either way, that's not demonstrating the eye, or production output, of a legitimate designer. Not even close. If I assumed you did it, and guessed that you have no real background in graphic design, that's not a very good sign. I look forward to seeing what round 2 brings.