[petroskie]

Here is my new fyler, please leave comments......i can take it.

 

[M&B LAWN CARE]

background is too busy, and its alittle hard to read because of the background.

 

[LawnoftheMonth]

^ this, and where is the after pic of the woods after you created a smooth, clear, usable area? froman needs to be seperated.

best of luck!

 

[Runner]

Yeah...I probably would have picked a more open serene setting...something that looks like a park, or something. This would give more of a connotation of what someones prop SHOULD look like.

 

[LouisianaLawnboy]

Your background picture is too dark and your font is too small. Bad combination.

 

[Chilehead]

I have to agree. Get a new background. The forest may be "rural", but a picture of a farm or mountain-laden horizon may be more appropriate.

 

[LB1234]

i would get it and throw it in the trash before I got into the house. WAY WAY to difficult to read. it actually hurts my eyes and I couldn't read most of it.

 

[Sammy]

I agree with what everyone else has said.